Dy's Take

December 25, 2011

The Happy Ending by Jonathan Sturak

Filed under: Indie Author,Short Stories,Skip It — Dy @ 19:48


Overwritten at the beginning, poorly edited overall, the action sequence is unclear and difficult to read with a finale that is beyond unrealistic.

I admit, I went into this Amazon freebie thinking it was erotica.

I don’t mind that it’s not, but I wish it had proved to be good enough to be worth the 20 minutes I spent reading it.


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