( 96 ) China Bayles #16
I likes that this wrapped up the whole what-really-happened-to-China’s-dad thread. It was a semi-complex story line, and I didn’t mind that it arced over three books, but I was glad to see its conclusion.
I didn’t mind the narrator switch as, for the first time in this series, Albert told the story from someone other than China’s perspective. What annoyed the hell out of me was the 1st person/3rd person switch between China & McQuaid. It felt heavy and forced, making McQuaid’s segments feel like a bad narrator voice-over to the action.
That and I am annoyed that I can already tell what the next book is about. When the next one comes out, who wants to bet that China is going to end up raising her orphaned niece and inheriting the money set in trust for the girl because the hints about the health of the current guardian in this volume were pedantically heavy-handed?
I really enjoy this series, and will continue to read them, but this one was definitely not up to the quality standard I’ve come to expect.![]()